I Ain't Afraid of No IOC... Jk...Yes I Am
Criterion B - 5. I talked about the literary devices used; however, I should have gone into further detail on the effect that they had on the passage and its meaning.
Criterion C - 2. I started out with an organized plan but I started repeating myself and jumping between ideas as I became nervous and needed to fill in time.
Criterion D - 3. My use of language was adequate, but I had a lot of pauses and a few "ums.." as I tried to regather my thoughts. My use of grammar was appropriate but I could have used a stronger vocabulary.